tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post8689811684565851431..comments2023-10-19T01:30:11.018+11:00Comments on 3POINT8: Inconspicuous Stranger3POINT8http://www.blogger.com/profile/02097881518064438926noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-39838295786052360162008-03-22T14:34:00.000+11:002008-03-22T14:34:00.000+11:00[cbenc12]Haha...part2 coming up part2 coming up.<B>[cbenc12]</B><BR/>Haha...part2 coming up part2 coming up.3POINT8https://www.blogger.com/profile/02097881518064438926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-36581519244225400742008-03-10T21:29:00.000+11:002008-03-10T21:29:00.000+11:00i like ur style of writing but i couldnt understan...i like ur style of writing but i couldnt understand what had happened in the building!<BR/>full of suspense..but read until the end also dunno what was de story (=.=)"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-16263678207529415122008-03-10T17:31:00.000+11:002008-03-10T17:31:00.000+11:00[curryegg][Alrite! Time to draft part2. Lets see.....<B>[curryegg][</B><BR/>Alrite! Time to draft part2. Lets see.....How can i add suspense and make the story more mysterious.<BR/>Got any idea curryegg??<BR/><BR/><B>[lotus flower]</B><BR/>What do u mean by "A lot time to build up"? Could you possibly be referring to the length of the story? Is it too long-winded?<BR/>Hope to get feedback from you soon..3POINT8https://www.blogger.com/profile/02097881518064438926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-88172791164739709512008-03-10T03:42:00.000+11:002008-03-10T03:42:00.000+11:00A lot of time to build up. But very good writing. ...A lot of time to build up. But very good writing. <BR/><BR/>Cheers!ctdwellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09971088766022669643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-60625531300839735892008-03-10T03:40:00.000+11:002008-03-10T03:40:00.000+11:00of course you will... ;)of course you will... ;)curryegghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06721042410436165797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-52937499306144589412008-03-10T02:07:00.000+11:002008-03-10T02:07:00.000+11:00[popjammerz]Thanks for the encouragement, rue! Wri...<B>[popjammerz]</B><BR/>Thanks for the encouragement, rue! <BR/>Writing fiction stuff is something new to me. I rather be writing sarcastic stuff on daily happenings. Anyway, Part2 to that story is coming in 2 weeks time. Stay tuned ya!3POINT8https://www.blogger.com/profile/02097881518064438926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-55288222085992257302008-03-09T20:24:00.000+11:002008-03-09T20:24:00.000+11:00deng...you really can write~~!!!think u shud start...deng...you really can write~~!!!<BR/>think u shud start writin fictions~<BR/>or open up a blog specially for all ur fics..HAHA~<BR/><BR/>waitin for part 2 then!-popjammerz-https://www.blogger.com/profile/17544349309374088491noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-1282042663733383292008-03-09T03:28:00.000+11:002008-03-09T03:28:00.000+11:00I want! I want!Dang, I'm hungry now. -_-I want! I want!<BR/><BR/>Dang, I'm hungry now. -_-Pam Songhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15399678618799594311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-81896795811920465932008-03-08T18:31:00.000+11:002008-03-08T18:31:00.000+11:00[cindy]oh yea.. you are correct. (Yur eyesight is ...<B>[cindy]</B><BR/>oh yea.. you are correct. (Yur eyesight is still good) I didn't realize the mistake until u mentioned about it.<BR/>I should write "When I saw my SUBSCRIBERS" instead of READERSHIP.<BR/>Thanks for correcting me!3POINT8https://www.blogger.com/profile/02097881518064438926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-62523802199532045872008-03-08T18:25:00.000+11:002008-03-08T18:25:00.000+11:00i just glanced through and saw that u wrote 30-40 ...i just glanced through and saw that u wrote 30-40 and i was quite surprised. haiya getting old, eyesight not that good anymore. haha. my bad!cindyluvhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17694581295385239487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-73295526030443458312008-03-08T18:07:00.000+11:002008-03-08T18:07:00.000+11:00[Just a simple girl]oh...ok. Yours must be a very ...<B>[Just a simple girl]</B><BR/>oh...ok. Yours must be a very private blog.<BR/>I've drafted part2 of the story. You will get the rough idea of whats happening in the story 2 weeks later. (that is if you are still following this blog) :P<BR/><BR/><B>[pamsong]</B><BR/>Cows in new zealand produce high quality milk. Take a lucky guess which country is next to NZ?<BR/>Besides, Aussies have their own cow farm. They can rival those in NZ.<BR/>Yum....Chocolates~~~<BR/><BR/><B>[curryegg]</B><BR/>Thank you Kelly! That was very encouraging. I'm drafting part2 to this story. With your encouraging words, I'm sure i can do a better job for part2.<BR/><BR/><B>[cindy]</B><BR/>70? more than that....<BR/>My daily readership is at 120+ average. And out of that 120, I guess only 20~40 ppl subscribed to my blog. The number is rising every week. Cool eh?<BR/>I thank Cindy and all of them for their support!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-8134514408030298522008-03-08T17:46:00.000+11:002008-03-08T17:46:00.000+11:00I was guessing ur readership would be around 70+! ...I was guessing ur readership would be around 70+! Cause I keep seeing ur name popping up around the blogsphere. =Pcindyluvhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17694581295385239487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-91935861996704180632008-03-08T04:22:00.000+11:002008-03-08T04:22:00.000+11:00aiyo.... now you sounds more humble than me le..I ...aiyo.... now you sounds more humble than me le..<BR/>I am honest with my words..<BR/>So, write more for us!<BR/>gambate!!!<BR/><BR/>;)curryegghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06721042410436165797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-89813390380461009262008-03-07T22:14:00.000+11:002008-03-07T22:14:00.000+11:00Ooo, I want!!! What chocs? What kind? And why's th...Ooo, I want!!! What chocs? What kind? And why's the milk different?Pam Songhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15399678618799594311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-42687037289871881652008-03-07T14:01:00.000+11:002008-03-07T14:01:00.000+11:003point8, yes i do blog, but mine wasnt as creative...3point8, <BR/><BR/>yes i do blog, but mine wasnt as creative as yours. =P i jus post whatever that comes to my mind...<BR/><BR/>For your story i was actually expecting an ending that reveals the suspense of what he did earlier on... what is his assignment; who is he; what happened at the building back then... =)me.et.mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03762274724196697141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-73398098666294895312008-03-07T12:36:00.000+11:002008-03-07T12:36:00.000+11:00[pamsong]If you want, I can bring back some really...<B>[pamsong]</B><BR/>If you want, I can bring back some really good chocolates from australia. (I heard what made chocolates so good in australia is the quality of the milk used in it)3POINT8https://www.blogger.com/profile/02097881518064438926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-19435549767178842942008-03-07T12:22:00.000+11:002008-03-07T12:22:00.000+11:00Haha. Rriiiggghhhttt. Chocolates?*grin*Haha. Rriiiggghhhttt. <BR/><BR/>Chocolates?<BR/><BR/>*grin*Pam Songhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15399678618799594311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-53254896601460978892008-03-07T12:13:00.001+11:002008-03-07T12:13:00.001+11:00[宝茹]At 1st it does. Towards the end, I can't conti...<B>[宝茹]</B><BR/>At 1st it does. Towards the end, I can't continue em anymore. So, i left it hanging somewhere.<BR/>I'm glad you noticed that! You have a pretty good attention to details<BR/><BR/><B>[x]</B><BR/>The bed scene over dy lor. you missed it! It's in the part while that guy is still in the building<BR/><BR/><B>[curryegg]</B><BR/>Wow, a compliment from the humble curryegg. I'm honoured.<BR/>Thanks thanks3POINT8https://www.blogger.com/profile/02097881518064438926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-70799850979563996262008-03-07T12:13:00.000+11:002008-03-07T12:13:00.000+11:00[pamsong]Hush hush....you don't have to say a word...<B>[pamsong]</B><BR/>Hush hush....you don't have to say a word. I know you are feeling good today.<BR/><BR/><B>[chingy]</B><BR/>Er... Details of the assignment cannot be released to the public.<BR/>But cheer up, I'll be releasing pt2 to this soon<BR/><BR/><B>[just a simple girl]</B><BR/>Erm...from your expression, was the ending bad?<BR/>Anyway, Do you blog?<BR/><BR/><B>[cometh]</B><BR/>I prefer to think of myself changing to a Creative writer. :P3POINT8https://www.blogger.com/profile/02097881518064438926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-57513575150651353372008-03-06T22:59:00.000+11:002008-03-06T22:59:00.000+11:00OMG....I love the way you write.. and honestly, yo...OMG....<BR/>I love the way you write.. and honestly, you're a good story writer!<BR/>Admire your writing skill...<BR/><BR/>;)curryegghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06721042410436165797noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-16010999566868205112008-03-06T19:47:00.000+11:002008-03-06T19:47:00.000+11:00where's the bed scene? how come no bed scene ?where's the bed scene? how come no bed scene ?xniquethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02367997241069646673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-39545912405841098162008-03-06T15:06:00.000+11:002008-03-06T15:06:00.000+11:00At first I thought the first words at every paragr...At first I thought the first words at every paragraph mean something. :PKatherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03788856648029212747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-12707314673658377132008-03-06T14:30:00.000+11:002008-03-06T14:30:00.000+11:00Woh, change to become a story teller?Woh, change to become a story teller?Comethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02522903774194396225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-83245867406438255002008-03-06T14:05:00.000+11:002008-03-06T14:05:00.000+11:00Erhmm...(-__-)"Erhmm...<BR/><BR/>(-__-)"me.et.mehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03762274724196697141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23793116.post-49510791451329600792008-03-06T13:57:00.000+11:002008-03-06T13:57:00.000+11:00Hm; Did he murder someone? Lol.Hm; <BR/>Did he murder someone? <BR/><BR/>Lol.Chee Chinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08285539250232911062noreply@blogger.com